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2 Book theme

The theme of this book is hardship.

I experience a lot of hard time.

Not every event is happy.

Hard time event, which people can not forget about.

This is very impressive.

There is thing to learn about a lot.

But, people don’t want to remind and talk about that.

Therefore, people can’t learn from this memory.

I want to make oppotunity.

If people read this book, it means chance to be touch with their hard time memory.

That make their life abandant.

So that, I want you to read this book.

○Passed examination to my first choice high school

This poem describes entrance exam of high school.

I was 15 years old in March.

My friend failed to that.

I was sad.

And, I thinked that I also fail too.

I pleased only half because I think about          a friend.

I first attend crammer in the previous year August.

Then, he was there already.

I became friend with him right away.

Because we had same dream about entrance exam of high school.

We were together in short time about 8 months.

But, I established him good relation.

“You’ll do fine” I’m feeling his tenderness.

○The marathon race in elementary school

I can run fast fairly well.

But, I don’t like run because I always feel pressure from what people think of me.

I attended soccer school since I was 5 years old.

Therefore My cardiopulmonary function was developing in elementary school.

I don’t like November because its race held.

I felt nervous from tension.

I always took a deep breath before the start so that calm down the mind.

Once I started and tension was gone.

I was able to concentrate in running.

○Decided the kanto tournament in soccer school

I was elementary school student.

I was member of the soccer club.

Our team was not so strongly.

Our school year was not more strongly.

Thus it was a dream for us such as kanto tournament.

It was not supposed to go on merit basis.

But, there was strength in our school year.

Unity was strong compared to other school years.

We got along well.

It just was not able to decided the kanto tournament.

There was also cooperation from underclassman.

Those were able to fulfill a dream.

○Part time job

I started the part time job since I graduated high school.

I had never made money.

So this is my first experience.

I worked in hourly.

I thought that it is easy unlike the study.

But, this idea was wrong.

I knew the difficulty to make money though the part time job.

If I work very hard a hour, I get only a small income.

But, I was feeling a rewarding any more.

I think it is important to feel rewarding.

○Dissect carp

I’m in Gunma university.

I’m member of the faculty of education.

I major in science here.

I like science.

In general, science teachers can touch the creatures.

But, I’m not good to touch the creatures.

In short, I don’t like creatures.

There were  lesson of anatomy at the biological experiment.

Among them, particularly impressive lesson was a dissection of carp.

I was able to put up with if I just touch the carp.

But, taking out the internal organs tore its body had been hesitant.

I has been in contact with the various creatures even before that.

Thus, I might have been able to determine the mind.

○The movie

I saw this movie second times.

The first time, I was elementary school student.

This time, I was able to see a movie with objective point of view.

The second time, university student.

Then, this movie made me inconsolable.

I identified with the character in the movie.

Character’s situation is the same as mine.

Now I’m not more lively than before.

I don’t spend a life with a sense of fulfillment.

It has passed same way everyday.

While I’m seeking an exciting thing.

I found a thing called overseas volunteer in this movie.

I can think, but I don’t into action.

○The first tlme of the house sitting

In this poetry, I was elementary school student.

I like my mother.

I often went shopping with my mother.

I had never experienced that there are no mother.

This is my first experience of no mother.

Then, I was struck with an indescribable sensation of horror and anxiety.

At the same time, I noticed that I can not do anything by myself.

I began to hate myself.

I thought a lot of things between house sitting.

Thus, I felt that the time is slowly.

And felt in another world.

I thought that it became the reason why I hate house sitting.

○Came Australian my home

I was a member of soccer club in elementary school.

In this club, there was a project of international exchange.

Thus, two Australian came my home.

They had big body.

They had brown eyes.

They had blonde hair.

They had their habbit.

They were quite different with me.

I was proactive in my communications.

I don’t speak much English.

I couldn’t be too much convey my idea for them.

It was same as them.

I spent time about five days with them.

I was able to close the distance between our hearts.

I didn’t be friends the real meaning.

○Experience the great East Japan Earthquake

I felt big shake for the first time experience.

At first, I didn’t know what happened.

I understood the situation to take a little while.

But, I didn’t understand seriousness of the situation.

Thus, I didn’t immediately go home.

While not be taken also contact.

As I was playing with my friends.

My mother was very angry.

But, it was somewhere sad face.

I also became very sad feeling.

I was again aware of the importance of family.

I will think the same thing when I become father.

○Failed entrance exam to university

I have studied hard for three years in high school.

At the time of admission, I was the member of the most head of the bad students.

I got bad results in an exam.

I studied desperately from that time.

My school work got steadily good.

I decided first-choice school.

That school is a very high level.

I was working hard toward that goal.

But, it’s taking a while to get there.

Finally, I decided to go third-choice school.

I was wondering whether to go.

Looking back, my choice which going to third-choice school is the correct answer in me.

6.25 homework

2 Book theme

The theme of this book is hardship.
I experience a lot of hard time.
Not every event is happy.
Hard time event, which people can not forget about.
This is very impressive.
There is thing to learn about a lot.
But, people don’t want to remind and talk about that.
Therefore, people can’t learn from this memory.
I want to make oppotunity.
If people read this book, it means chance to be touch with their hard time memory.
That make their life abandant.
So that, I want you to read this book.

○Passed examination

This poem describes entrance exam of high school.
I was 15 years old in March.
My friend failed to that.
I was sad.
And, I thinked that I also fail too.
I pleased only half because I think about a friend.
I first attend crammer in the previous year August.
Then, he was there already.
I became friend with him right away.
Because we had same dream about entrance exam of high school.
We were together in short time about 8 months.
But, I established him good relation.
“You’ll do fine” I’m feeling his tenderness.

○The marathon race

I can run fast fairly well.
But, I don’t like run because I always feel pressure from what people think of me.
I attended soccer school since I was 5 years old.
Therefore My cardiopulmonary function was developing in elementary school.
I don’t like November because its race held.
I felt nervous from tension.
I always took a deep breath before the start so that calm down the mind.
Once I started and tension was gone.
I was able to concentrate in running.

○Decided the kanto tournament

I was elementary school student.
I was member of the soccer club.
Our team was not so strongly.
Our school year was not more strongly.
Thus it was a dream for us such as kanto tournament.
It was not supposed to go on merit basis.
But, there was strength in our school year.
Unity was strong compared to other school years.
We got along well.
It just was not able to decided the kanto tournament.
There was also cooperation from underclassman.
Those were able to fulfill a dream.

○My pet dog

I recently got a dog.
I and him were still 9 months to meet.
When I met him, his age was 6 months.
So he was very small.
Now, he grew up healthy.
We will be soon the same age.
Because the dog is different from how to take ages of human.
Now he was already smart my partner.
And he still heals me same as when I met.
But, I don’t know always what he are thinking.
Is he hungry? sleepy? happy?
We can’t understand each other how we are good partners.
It was so sad.

○Part time job

I started the part time job since I graduated high school.
I had never made money.
So this is my first experience.
I worked in hourly.
I thought that it is easy unlike the study.
But, this idea was wrong.
I knew the difficulty to make money though the part time job.
If I work very hard a hour, I get only a small income.
But, I was feeling a rewarding any more.
I think it is important to feel rewarding.

○Made assist in soccer game

I like soccer since I can remember.
I have played soccer for 10 years.
I’m right-handed.
But, foot is the left-handed.
I have experienced a variety of positions FW, MF and DF.
I was happy to take a point in my childhood.
Accuracy, I was happy to win the game with my point.
I had self-centered idea.
Football is a team sports.
Following this, my idea was wrong.
That’s the first time I noticed about that.
I wanted to do anything for the team win.
Then, I founded the assist.
It means making way to the goal.

○Dissect carp

I’m in Gunma university.
I’m member of the faculty of education.
I major in science here.
I like science.
In general, science teachers can touch the creatures.
But, I’m not good to touch the creatures.
In short, I don’t like creatures.
There were lesson of anatomy at the biological experiment.
Among them, particularly impressive lesson was a dissection of carp.
I was able to put up with if I just touch the carp.
But, taking out the internal organs tore its body had been hesitant.
I has been in contact with the various creatures even before that.
Thus, I might have been able to determine the mind.

About the concept map

My theme is “hardship”.
Looking back on my life, There are a lot of happy event.
But, not every event is happy.
I experience hard time.
Man wants to talk to the person happy event.
It makes listener happy.
Therefore, man tend to focuses on that.
But, There is nothing to learn from that.
On the other hand, what about hardship event?
It is the event which people can not forget about.
That is very impressive.
But, people don’t want to remind and talk about that.
Becouse they don’t want to feel suffering.
But, I think that hardship event is more important than happy event.
Becouse we can learn a lot from that.
For example, courage, patience and desire to improve ourselves.
I think that we can see the beauty there.
I also find the some similarities in the concept map.
At first, “first time experience”.
I made 15 poetrys.
first time experience events are a lot among them.
It is nothing special.
No matter what, the first time is impressive.
Therefore, those remain in my memory.
Second, “family and friends”.
In my poetrys, family and friends appeared.
Becouse of the people that I spent the most of the time.
For the reason, I wrote poetrys a lot.

#2 and last three poetrys

#2
○My pet dog
He is cute
He is wise
He always heals me everyday
He always sits next to me every day.

But, he can’t understand my idea
I can’t understand his idea, either.

A big wall is standing between us.

家族であるが、どうしても越えられない言葉の壁があるという対称的なことをこのポエムで述べたかった。He always sits next to me every day.を付けることでより家族の一員であるという印象を強めることができた。また、I can’t understand his idea, either.を付け加えることで相互に分かり合えないとなっている。

 

 

○Passed examination to my first choice high school

I am proud
I think I will do my best

A friend who attend same crammer fail
Pass him at the out of the gate
He feel like down
Say “you’ll do fine”

○The marathon race in elementary school

I don’t like
I feel nervous
Also feel, time stop
Deep breath, my routine
But, shot ring out, simply ran and ran

○Decided the kanto tournament in soccer school

I’m 12 years old
The weather is sunny after rain
I’m so tired
Opponent is higher rank team
Game has sense of urgency
It decide by PK
Tension is all solve

12 poetrys

○My pet dog

It is cute
It is wise
It heals me everyday

However, can’t understand idea
Wall, don’t exceed human and dog

○Part time job

Tenth, failed, tired
Social experience the first time
learn about make money
So difficult
But, feel satisfy and worth

◯Made assist in soccer game

Not noticeable…
To assist goal
But, technical, glad
Interesting as difficult
Not born by eliminate assist.

◯Dissect carp

With assumption, resistance to touch
More resistance to touch content
Everyone same
Make up mind.

○Went to Hokkaido

North island in Japan
Ride train,
Driving
Asahiyama zoo
See only snow and sea infront of me
White and blue view jumps in my eyes

But, in Sapporo
High building
delicious food
light up
Red and yellow scene jumps in my eyes

○Sunrise in the sea

A cold morning
quiet beach
Horizon extends… wherever
Only the sun moves
Slowly and slowly
Feeling “time goes by”

○Met with my friend

A men of the same age
Same club in junior high school
Smart, kind, sensitive
I always ask concern
He respond everything
Indispensable in my life

○The movie

“僕たちは世界を変えることができない”
Emotional
That’s sadness, emotional

Can’t go to school
Can’t go to hospital
Can’t eat enough food

Seen only what you see in the eyes

○The first time of the house sitting

Early evening
Sad, silent
Like in another world
No one is existence
A clock gain slowly
Meet, meet, simply want to meet mom

○Came Australian my home

2 Australian come my home as soccer program
Older than me
Play soccer with them
During half time, they drink soda
At bathroom, don’t sink into tub
Feeling different culture

I can’t imitate
Just because don’t hate
I can admit

○Experience the great East Japan Earthquake

13 years old
In school, the day of graduation ceremony
school finishes at noon

Then I’m in the restaurant with my friend
Therefore reassuring
Don’t go home immediately
But, that make mom nervous
I’m young children

○Failed entrance exam to university

I don’t try to first choice
Lack of academic ability
Go to university…, where almost no think
But, enjoy everyday
Nobody knows what will happen
Not all the No.1 choice

#2 and new three poetry

#2

○Went to Hokkaido

North of the earth in Japan
Ride train, driving and went Asahiyama zoo
See snow and sea only
Have image, white and blue

But, went Sapporo
High building and delicious food
change to white, blue, red and yellow

 

#1

○Sunrise in the sea

Cold day, morning
In the beach, quietly
Extend horizon wherever
Move the sun only
Feel “time goes by”

○My pet dog

It is cute
It is wise
It heals me everyday

However, can’t understand idea
Wall, don’t exceed human and dog

○Part time job

Tenth, failed, tired
Social experience the first time
learn about make money
So difficult
But, feel satisfy and worth

Three poetrys

◯Made assist in soccer game

Not noticeable…
To assist goal
But, technical, glad
Interesting as difficult
Not born by eliminate assist.

◯Went to Hokkaido

North of the earth in Japan
Have image of white and blue
Actually, high building and delicious food too
Change to white, blue, red and yellow.

◯Dissect carp

With assumption, resistance to touch
More resistance to touch content
Everyone same
Make up mind.

15 significant moments

Short lists of 15 significant moments in my life.
◯Decided the kanto tournament in soccer school.
・12years old.
・The weather was sunny after rain.
・It decided by PK.
・I was tired.
・I was satisfied.
・The place was river bed.
・The opponent was higher rank team.
・The game had sense ofurgency.

◯The marathon race in elementary school.
・I don’t like.
・There was pressure in my mind.
・Before the Start of tension.
・Sense of accomplishment after took 1st place.
・Build up physical strength.
・Deep breath was my routine.
・I don’t feel the cold though the winter.
・I concentrated run.

◯Passed examination to my first choice high school.
・I was very proud.
・My friend Failed.
・Went to high school to see poster.
・Passed my friend at the out of the gate.
・My friend feel like down.
・He said “you’ll do fine.”
・I think I will do my best.

◯Failed entrance exam to university.
・I don’t try to first choice university.
・I lacked of academic ability.
・I was interested in engineering.
・Passed entrance exam to faculty of education.
・There was a conflict.
・I think the way of take out.
・Decision was forced.
・I was very nervous.
・Selected the way of faculty of education.

◯Experienced the great East Japan Earthquake.
・I was 13 years old.
・The day of graduation ceremony.
・The school finished at noon.
・Went to lunch with my friends at that time.
・I didn’t notice earthquake the first.
・Didn’t go home immediately.
・My mother anglyed at me.
・I was pained at the causing my mother.

◯Came Australian to my home.
・2 Australian come my home as the homestay.
・They are older than me.
・They came as the soccer program.
・I played soccer with them.
・They have muscle body.
・They don’t eat much.
・They don’t take a bath, only shower.
・They often drink coke.

◯The first time of the house sitting.
・I was sad.
・It was silent.
・No one was existence.
・I wanted to call my mother.
・My mother went to shopping.
・Father was working.
・I was not relux.
・I was tenth.
・The time was early evening.
◯Watched the movie “bokutachi ha sekai wo kaerukoto ga dekinai”
・I was impressed.
・I was sad.
・It’s like I’m inside the movie.
・I knew the essence of the world.
・I was intrigued about volunteer.
・I watched this boyhood.

◯Met with my friend.
・He is a men of the same age.
・I met him in junior high school.
・Menber of the same club.
・He is smart.
・He is kind.
・He is sensitive.
・I ask his advice on everything.
・I like him very much.
◯Started a part-time job.
・The first time of social experience.
・I was very tenth.
・Among unfamiliar, very tired.
・learned that to make money.
・It was very difficult.
・I failed a lot.
・It was very fun.

◯Met with my pet dog.
・It was so cute.
・It can’t understand my idea.
・It heals me everyday.
・Dog species is schnauzer.
・It is very wise.
◯Made assist in soccer game.
・It is glad.
・It is to produce a goal.
・It is not noticeable.
・It is technical.
・interesting as difficult.
◯Went to Hokkaido.
・I had the image of cold
・Actually, don’t feel the cool.
・The air is clear.
・There are a lot of snow.
・Seafood is very delicious.
・Asahiyama zoo is very fun.

◯Dissected carp in the experiment.
・I don’t like touching fish.
・There is a resistance to touch the organ.
・Everyone in the class had the same thing.

◯Saw the sunrise in the sea.
・It is cold day.
・Went to Oarai beach
・In the morning.
・I feel a lot better.
・Feel how tiny am I for you

EXPRESS LOVE IN THAI AND IN ENGLISH

I understand poetry writing by L1 and L2 writers.
I don’t know Thai language ever.
Thai language and English is different in expressing emotions.
Maiake preferred using the Thai language to English in writing poetry.
Because he felt more competent.
Thai language poetry is direct.
Thus, the word choices that he used in his Thai poem signified that he could express his romantic feelings well such as ta-nhom (cherish) or ruk (love).
I think it is important to make good use of the similar words cherish and love.
But, English poetry is indirect.
English poems contained metaphors.
Thus, he express his emotion in the abstract quality.
Em prefered the English.
Because he uses English daily.
He challenge to express his romantic emotions in Thai language.
But, it is awkward and nervous.
I think that if we express emotions, we should use our first language.
Mai implied that the Thai language is suitable for poetry writing.
If we mention the term “beautiful”, there are a lot of ways in explaining the term such as elegant, graceful, etc.
Thai lunguage can convey many emotions in many way.
She also use English song as the poetry.
I think song and poetry is very similar in that both of them convey the feelings.
Mod, her Thai poem is more personal and conveys emotion in a meaningful way.
In contrast, her English poem is generic.
I think that metaphor prevent English poem from personal information and making distance.
I think creative writing is important to us because we need to convey our emotions everyone.

 

Short lists of 15 significant moments in my life.
1. Decided the kanto tournament in soccer school.
2. Took first place in the marathon race in elementary school.
3. Got into my first choice high school.
4. Failed entrance exam to university.
5. Experienced the great East Japan Earthquake.
6. Came Australian to my home.
7. The first time of the house sitting.
8. Watched the movie “bokutachi ha sekai wo kaerukoto ga dekinai”
9. Met with my friend.
10. Started a part-time job.
11. Met with my pet dog.
12. Made assist in soccer game.
13. Went to Hokkaido.
14. Dissected carp in the experiment.
15. Saw the sunrise in the sea.

Earthquake Experience

I learn about L2 writers very much.
I wonder that the theme is earthquake.
But, I understand the that means.
Earthquake is traumatic event.
That is negative.
That impression continue to remain in our mind.
And that bring out our direct responses and emotional concerns.
I also understand methods of date analysis.
A lot of methods exist.
For example, count words per poem, examining the lexical richness and analysis involved the usage of emotional words.
I am especially interested in thematic analysis.
If we experience same earthquake, a lot of how to feel exist.
So, the theme is not one.
Analyst should read all of the poem.

 

I choose the poem that the third issue of the safety confirmation.
this poem is constructed by two stanzas.
The first stanza is negative impression.
The second stanza is positive impression.
“I am at home with my mom when there is a big earthquake”
That express everyday.
That is compared to earthquake.
Because of the emphasized earthquake.
“But I can’t use home phone because of a blackout.”
That means secondary disaster.
Earthquake happen, and electric poles fall.
So, They don’t use electric machines.
Life becomes inconvenient.
“つながりません on the screen”
This line is very impressive.
Flexible dual lunguage word choice is very unique.
Using Japanese “つながりません in English poem makes it emotional.
“It is getting dark little by little.”
It indicate negative scene.
But, after that, writer’s father call him.
“We are fine”
This phrases make all happy.
I think that the aim of the study poem is to investigate the ability of express the emotion.
That poetry is very nice.